Rough ideas --> lyrical ideas & draft of song

Hey wazzzup!

Alrite guys! heres a sneak preview of how the song of our Music Video would be like.

well actually its not a sneak preview but some rough ideas of our songs..

7sins(draft1) by Elvinardy


(recorded raw using toneport & ableton)



below are some lyrical ideas..i know its not tat good but its a start...its still not in order with the story i think.

hope its not tat bad enough...theres still no chorus yet in this...as chorus is one of the hardest part to write..but soon we'll come out with it.

feel free to add on some ideas to the lyrics guys:)

7 sins,

It’s a fine day,

With a simple thought

And so the story starts

When the world's got a funny way of turning around on you

Where there’s a sin committing all around you.

Buying all the fancy clothes and fancy jewellery..

Makes me feel all wary..

Cause your character makes you pretty ugly..

With all the greed and pride that is in you..

Thinking that there is no one above you.

Having a life that’s so pretentious

What am i suppose to do.

I can't seem to understand it

How you've turned out to be so cold

Showing your wrath for the sake of food and drinks..

Your own gluttony in you cause you to be angry

So are you happy with yourself?

I hope you realized

I felt uneasy and disgusted

As my words turns to phrases, phrases turns to prayers

Not knowing does this date really matters?

In her mind she goes “oh i’ve got to have you now”

having sex is her own personal ambition

When love turns to lust and back again

With the fire in her eyes that is dragging me along.

But i know I’m not committing..

Not committing..this deadly sin.

Your eyes are locked on me

my eyes are fixed elsewhere..

I know jealousy is in you now

As i start to get close to her

i don't even care

of your stare..

Coz I’ve found my own..

When this is all over.

There will be nothing left..

It’s not all good..

It’s not all bad..

So I’m going away..

Going away..

Away from this deadly sins.. (i wish i could..)

So don’t look back now..

When this holds out..then i’ve found you

Ok till next time then..:)

VIN